i like the fact that you have used pictures showing what to do. But the work doesn't meet the value of the set work because you have incorrectly spelled the word 'click' also you haven't explained or given any information on how you make a g-mail account, you have only uploaded pictures which gives hardly and information. this piece of work could be vastly improved by annotating or writing on how you actually make a g-mail account. There was a mistake on slide 2 where you wrote 'clik' instead of 'click' which shows that you didn't double check your work to see if you had made any mistakes.
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ReplyDeletei like the fact that you have used pictures showing what to do. But the work doesn't meet the value of the set work because you have incorrectly spelled the word 'click' also you haven't explained or given any information on how you make a g-mail account, you have only uploaded pictures which gives hardly and information. this piece of work could be vastly improved by annotating or writing on how you actually make a g-mail account. There was a mistake on slide 2 where you wrote 'clik' instead of 'click' which shows that you didn't double check your work to see if you had made any mistakes.
ReplyDeletejames you should of added more information insted of puting 8 words on there if you added more you could of got a better mark
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